Cultural globalization—a phenomenon that has been driven by technological advancements and economic integration—is a threat to local cultures.
Explanation In this sentence, there are two errors: one is related to the use of articles before abstract nouns, and the second is related to the use of appositive phrases.
Error 1: Incorrect Use of “The” Before “Cultural Globalization”
The cultural globalization is a threat… (Incorrect)
Cultural globalization is a threat… (Correct)
Error 2: Unnecessary “It Is” in the Appositive Phrase
Cultural globalization—it is a phenomenon that has been driven by… (Incorrect)
Cultural globalization—a phenomenon that has been driven by… (Correct)
